It is merely a drawing change for clarity. Move the wire from + to Victron shunt. For drawing purposes draw it from the Switch/Fuse connection to the side of the shunt and label it "+B1" for battery voltage monitoring. At installation this will connect directly to the battery postive. Then move the point where the negative of the Norco charger connects just after the shunt. In actual installation the Norco negative will be at the output end of the shunt. Yes this will work. It will show drain from the battery as well as charger input into the battery and when you are charging and drawing current at the same the difference will be accounted for.
I think you are confusing mechanical electrical layout and electrical schematic in one. They should be two separate drawings. Great napkin sketch for first efforts, at least you are using a grid.